This is the greatest poem that i've looked at in a long time.Great Job Keep up the good work k. luvs ya!!!!

This was an excellent poem it really spoke to me. you are very tallented and thank you for the feedback. most people dont give good feedback these days but your work is simply amazing good work

I know i've commented before Honey, but once again, i'm so proud of you.
I'm always going to love you ok?
Love Marcus xx

I love this one too, you do write really good. 5/5

Once again, you're left me speechless. I absolutely love this poem too. Cannot wait to read more. You're such a talented writer. Great job.
5/5
:D

Excellent poem I think we all do this sort of thing to the ones we love.

This is a cool poem. you are such a good poet. keep it up!

Aaawh ^^

Beautiful and sweet. i love it.
Chocoaholic...thats another story haha

Very good, i liked it very much so

5/5

---Sin

I understand what you mean when you say you hurt yourself by hurting him. Im an arguement we don't think before we just yell things out, and sometimes i think we're actually trying to hurt there feelings in a way. We know everything about the person good and bad and it makes it that much easier to upset them with our words. Fantastic poem as always, amazing flow and word choice, 5/5 GG23

This is really good

Another amazing peice! i especially loved the lines :
"I guess in a way I just still can't believe
That you would love someone as messed up as me"
i think a lot of people can relate to that!
really lovely poem! truly wonderful.

Wonderful piece =)

Gosh, this was excellent, i loved it, it told me of a story, and i got to thinking i am a little harsh sometimes. i hurt the one i love. and now i'm trying to get her back. but this stirred emotions in me. well done.

5/5 david