Man, kinda creepy but deffinately good, sound a little possesive lol i think it was great it flowed very easily 5/5

I rreally like this poem.. but i dont understand why you sperateted your poem the way you did...?? parts are actual stanzas and then some are just like random words.. but i still really like it :)

* yeah um.. sorry i forgot the star thing in the last comment this is a part of the 10 for 15

* oh Wow. I felt the hate clearly in this poem. Amazing. 5/5

*It sounds like a nightmare Stephen King would write about or make a movie out of LOL. Flow and rhyme scheme need some work but you still did a nice job!