Wow....tom..i dont know what to say. there were so many dark and sad and mystical parts to it...could you explain it to me better in an email? I reallly liked it though, just the perfect way you write it. and for ome reason these lines really struck me-

half-eaten secrets cover the scars
Saturn soothes your spirit, unlike timid Mars

Just the whole correlation with the feelings and the planets was wonderful.

Long yet very interesting poem. i trully loved it! some of the words you used were great!

5/5 david