Aww Hun this was such a sweet poem.. Love the hopefulness at the end, it's very inspirational.. Very well written as always.. well done 5/5 xx

*big hugs* just cos I felt like it ;]

What a beautiful poem, God i love it, it reminds me of myself, ~silent eyes~

Excellent poem darling, I loved it

The Angel of Secrets

Some typos and grammar errors(im a grammar w**re) but other than that i love it. its got grea detail without overdoing it. good scheme also, thx for ur comments,
~sore

I couldn't agree more with the message in your poem. Never give up on hope, something will come along one day that will forever make you happy. Excellent job 5/5

Good job! The message here is avery good one. There is always hope. Take Care Cindy

That was sweet & inspirational.
I agree with the message in that you have got to keep hope in your world at all times.
Great flow and your choice of wording was simply beautiful. You've got a lot of talent as a writer and I look forward to reading more of your work. Keep it up! 5/5

Stephanie

Very inspirational, my favourite kind of poem, full of hope and truth.
you are a wonderful writer, keep it up,
much love, Tara-Kay

Wow, that was so inspirational! Love the surprise twist at the end-happy ending, yay! ^.^
It was such a beautiful poem, thank you for sharing your talents! Simply brilliant!!

Heartz!