Debbie this is beautiful wish I could do things like this. Excellent job!

What else can I say. It is beautiful like all the others.

Really really good debbie. lots of my favorite words in this one 5/5

Great poem like always, you have proved ur skill again, This was really great. another 5/5 from me like always.

Oh! Excellent poem!
I've only ever done one etheree and this mirrored one is fab! I'll have to give it a go when i have more time.
Christmas is really bearing down now =( No time for anything!
I hope you have a nice one too!
Fabulous poem thought, really good!
5/5
*Gem*

An ultimate piece of work....these different structures just kills me all the time....never could dare to even try...i guess i lack confidence in these.. :o)

This is really very beautifully written.

all the best and take care

Such a excellent piece of work....
u have it in u .....which shows in ur words

Hey,
fantastic poem!it's 1 of the most beautiful poems i've ever read.Girl u r really good.if i can say more i would ,but sorry i g2g 2 church.
byezbyezzzz

Sad =/ but well wirtten

I found it interesting. the way it starts and ends the same way. the whole setup is intriguing. well done. :o)

It's nice and beautiful. Just not at the top of my favorites. I'm sorry.

Nice shape of poem...
good job

This is really good. I love the way you ended with the word "One". It really emphasizes the desolation in this poem. Great work.

5/5

You know, I tried this once...it didn't work out quite so well. Heh. This was an amazing write. I love the whole idea of it. I doubt I could pull something off like this. Lol. And my brother said it was "sick". Which is really good. Haha. Never stop writing!! Take care!! Love,

-` Poetess

What to say? again just lost for words!!

6/5....I have gone back to several of your poems....just wish you could put a 6 down.

Very talented!