WOW! I am breathtaken. Truely, i think that is an amazing poem! It flows perfectly and the message in it was great. The ending was strong and summed up the poem nicely. Really hun, this is an excellent poem. Definately a favorite of mine that you've written. Keep it up! I love reading them. =] 5/5

Tammie xo

Woow!!! it's been a long time since i haven't read your poems but i can say you didn't lose your talent AT ALL!!! it's so wonderfully written, it passes such a sweet message through the rhymes....... keep writing!!!!!!

This is sweet and refreshing to see . loved it hun

xxx alex xxx