AHH
2nd line- big!! BIG !! 3 letter word=a nono!!!!!! poetry 101!!!

sorry that annoyed me
moment-proved it -not rhyme

Overall not bad. the rhythm kind of annoyed me. and the rhymes were someone cliche. or just not working.

theme- understandable & relatable.

flow- it flowed pretty well. some spots it could have been better

but i didnt, im sorry to say, care for this poem that much.
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x3 Lauren

"Dream, but then I'm woken.
In my dreams words are unspoken."

I thought this poem was simply beautiful.
The last line was magical.. the rhythm just flowed like fluid.
You're very talented and you were on my faves too =)
Well done
5/5
*Gem*

I enjoyed this.
I thought the last two lines were really good, really effective and powerful.
I thought the flow was shaky in a couple of places but apart from that you did a wonderful job.

This poem is really well written and the flow is great also, nobody makes us feel the way the ones we love do, its very special great job 5/5