Wow, great poem
i can kind of relate but every story is different
the only one who free's me and keeps me standing in this life
is Jesus Christ my savior and my Father in heaven
i can only hope that its the same for you
because without Them the world is lost

Excellent. The imagery was intense and vivid. It all tied in together quite well. Definite talent. Slight flow troubles but not distracting. Nice vocab. Kept attention throughout.
~Faith-less