Omg!!!!
this poem made me really cry and i mean loads!!!!
Readin it the i felt like i was talkin to myself, really touched a nerve!!!
great!!!
its full of emotition that i really want to say myself but i dont think i have the confidence yet lol
5/5 for sure

Great poem
i Loved the flow and the language
5/5
~!Stevie
(Broken & battered)

This is really good.. and this one reminds me of my ex fiance... but yea.. it's really good 5/5

OoO MaN! YoUr PoEm Is Gr8!!! KeEp Up ThE GoOd WoRk!!!! PlEaSe ReAd AnD cOmMeNt My PoEmS ToO!!! HoPe ThAt YoU r FeElInG BeTtEr!!!

MuCh LoVe,
*TearDrop*
AKA
JeSsIcA

WOW!!! this is REALLLLLLLLLLLLLLYYYY GOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! sh** it is actually pretty damn good ay lol duno quite what to say but yeah its f**king awsum!!

its realy familiar... not for me, but my bf's ex. she HATES me 'cause he dropped her for me. we went out lyk less then a week after they broke up. She pretends to lyk me for his sake but now i find out she's litterally comming to kill me or seriously hurt me...

about 3months after we started going out she decides this :S HAHA

but yea this poem is relly good!!! 11/10

much love .xx

This is really good. i liked the way you worded things

Great poem. Thanx 4 ur comment on my poem. keep writing!!! 5/5

~K3!$3Y~

A 5/5 from me.....really liked it...amazing flow throughout
loved the repetition of the word BABY
check out any of mine if u feel like it

Wow.... this is so well written i love it =D

u are a great writer....i love it :)

much luv .xx

Loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee it xxx