Comments : Discotheque

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    This is very deep feelings. Very sad to people who do care about how others feel. The deep feelings of sadness and pain can be felt in this poem. Excellent job.

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    "I guess its only me looking for an excuse to be depressed
    So addicted now of blaming others, i think i am obsessed
    But then this is how circle of life is supposed to rotate
    When everybody is falling in love my heart is loving to hate"

    That stanza was just amazing, the whole poem was but wow hun.. what a in depth poem...
    You outdid yourself (again!!) on this piece..
    Another diamond =)
    Excellente!
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by dora

    Hey hun lot of emotion in this poem. very deep and powerful poem hun xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Nee

    Hello My Talented ^.^
    what a sweet penned!!
    I love the 2nd and the 3rd stanzas so much..they're probably the best =)
    a very great poem with so much sadness in it...
    I hope you're feeling refreshed & always be happy =)

    G'luck with the comings
    Luv
    NemO xxxxxxx

  • 17 years ago

    by PURE HEART

    Amazing dark poem again! yaar from where do u bring these thoughts in ur mind???????? well good job as usual! no doubt 5/5

    luv

  • 17 years ago

    by debbylyn

    I love the way you compare the people around to rabbits and animals as you sit and observe. Very deep feelings are expressed so well in this piece. Great job! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Liz

    "I guess its only me looking for an excuse to be depressed
    So addicted now of blaming others, i think i am obsessed
    But then this is how circle of life is supposed to rotate
    When everybody is falling in love my heart is loving to hate"
    ___

    This poem was just simply amazing. I love the way you wrote this one. I don't even know what to say. I just love it!! Never stop writing!! =] Take care.

    `Poetess

  • 17 years ago

    by Christina McDowell

    WOW! ur style of writing is almost the same as mine. ur poems are all g8!!! chek mine out 2 if u get da chance...