Loved this poem. WOW is all i can say. If I had 5 thumbs id put dem up but cas i dont ill give up 2 thumbs up = ] YOU REALLY HAVE TALENT!
xxBonnie

Amazin poem well done !!i love your choice of words

Really great, Twisted Heart, I really loved it!!! You are such a talented writer. Thanks for another great read! :)
~Midnight Sun

Beautiful poem, it was a bit confusing, but I got it....you know it takes me a while! lol you're last two stanzas were incredible. I really have a hard time critiquing your poems...and by the way...if you ever enter my future contests (which I hope you do!!!!) I'll probably just have to give you comments as you write poems! lol Cuz I love your work so much, that I've read almost all of it!
So good job, keep it up!
Charisma*

This was a really beautiful poem, I am not even kidding, especially how none of the lines felt awkward. It seemed like a very straight forward poem that included the reader without making them feel as though they were a stranger.

You watch the shattered pieces
Fall against the hungry hold
The shards of glass has cut you
And brought with it the cold.

Among the wasted memories
You walk with feet of clay
Unsteadied by forgotten dreams
Inside your heart they play.

^^^^
I loved these 2 stanzas Jeannie and could not decide which one was my favorite. The entire poem was heart touching but those 2 stanzas just leaped right out at me.

Take care, my dear friend

I love this poem.....best I've read in a while! 5/5

"To peak inside the window
And see what lies within
Would be the fate of trusting
That you could love again."

To love again after having a heart smashed is always the most difficult thing to do, well it was in my case. But thats the thing isn't it,
"Love is giving someone the power to destroy you but trusting them not to"
(My fave phrase)
A amazing poem...
5/5
*Gem*