Awwww. This definetly brought a smile to my face = ] Your words are so true!
Loved this poem
xxBonnie

Wow this is amazingly true and so well done I love it so much 5/5

Love the poem. it's the truth and we should all live by what is says.

This was really awesome, the rhyming was great but the message even better! great job.

Wow, that was a really good poem and def. true ... keep writing .. your good

Very well written
loved ut keep writing
laura

Your a good writer

i like how you put ion all of the rhetorical questions

Another great one i like how your poems have meaning to them!