Pretty darn kewl my man!! pretty kewl!

Definitely dark.... but sad too, for one who has suffered so in his life, then took it out on others and then be put to death, but yet to him death is the answer to his long time suffering......

An amazing write sweets, truly amazing. I give you 5 gold stars.

Hugs and Love,
Chica

Nice. i esp love the last line. its soo touching

Smiting those content with what is seen
Lashing out at what was never known
Collecting a debt paid in innocent blood

beautifully expressed words - again, you have conveyed so much in such few words.
remarkable! truly!

peace
shobhana

Best poem I've read on here so far. Really enjoyed it.