I know how much it sucks to write a poem and have everyone look at it and not vote or anything so im leaving u this comment to say that this poem is so true to everyone who has gone through this thing. I always think a good title grips people. The title of this poem was so gripping i had to read it. You have talent. Keep writing and don't give up no matter what other people say. Believe in yourself and you will soar.

Another fantasticly tragic write. A bloody release from pain and sadness. Again well written..