Comments : What Were You Thinking?

  • 17 years ago

    by Marissa

    Very good.
    I can tell that you put your emotions into this poem!
    Keep on writing.

  • 17 years ago

    by Kelly

    This is an excellent poem. And very difficult subject to write about. There is nothing worse than knowing someone you cared about did a deed like that. You cant understand how they can be so selfish. You got the emotions across in your words, spot on.

    Kelly
    xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Wow! i love this one..i really like poems that have questions like that... good job!!! 5/5