Comments : Absent In The God Storm

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    Sorry i can't comment constructively, i have a lot going on at the moment since my nan's passing. I want to thank you however for the lovely comment you left on the poem about her.
    I read through this poem and the way i was reading, i interpreted quite a powerful message between the lines.

    "From your promiscuous eyes,
    Can you see the storm getting closer?"

    I especially loved the opening.

  • Once again I applaud your wonderful skills. I thank you also once again for the comments. haha...doubt I could impress you. Thanks always!
    99 billion/5


  • 17 years ago


    Perfect! I loved it! And I totally agree with Gem! Beautiful opening!