Its good but you dont have a ryming sceme like the lines that ryme in one stanza should be the lines that ryme in the next

Hmmmm, somebody is in LOVE... :o)

This is really very nicely written.
Mausam ka asar ho raha hai.......hai na?? ..:o))

all the best and take care

Sometimes relationships break in a way,they shouldnt break...Sometimes hearts start to ache in a way,they shouldnt ache...Sometimes souls go in way,they shouldnt go....So enjoy and live your today,b'coz tomorrow you never know...
Beautiful poem of a loving soul..take care and keep smiling always...

After such a long time i came to read these poems..and found ur new poems..whilst reading them..my face lit up with a smile... :)
5/5

merry christmas
hav a great new year!

Hey this was really good. very well structured great use of words. lot of emotion coming thru. thanks heaps for ur comment on my poem. meant alot xx