This is an amazing poem...great work

Oh I like it! You're really good with naute poems!

Naima

Ah, beautiful! Well done!
I love your nature poems
so far. They are wonderful!
Keep up the great work!
God Bless 5/5
<3tay ^__^ily

I loved this poem, as well. It reminded me of a teenage girl who was once the most amazing girl, and then got depressed or whatever.. and realized what she was missing out on, and that she needed to be happy to actually live, eh. BUT, it's a nature poem. Lol. That's why I love nature poems, they have MANY mulitple meanings, without the writer even knowing. keep it up. :D

Again this was beatuifully written, word choice was extremely wonderful.