This is really good. i can totally relate!
keep it up!!

*Shawte*

This poem is cool i like it

Nice poem

She breathes her last breath and
holds onto the memory of his smile
as her reality turns into a dream.
--very well written

Thats a great poem

I love it! You've got talent.

Great words,

strong one ,

in my opignion , it could use some rhyming!!

I like it good job

Wow, dead silence reading it. dark and poetic, 5/5 poem indeed!

Superb poem relly like it ..Strong feelings coming through with your choosen words