A great poem:) the part that i liked the most was:

I cry the tears
That my own dream caused
The pain it caused me
The Tears it brought

good job;)

Hmm ilove this.. i can relate at the same time.. definitely i can feel the emotion and the sadness very interesting and i think it written well. keep on writing all what u feel and like very nice job.

Good job!!! this is a good poem!

Good job!!! this is a good poem!

Good job!!! this is a good poem!

I really liked this poem
keep up the good work.!
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