Very good poem, could tell the pain through your words. keep up the good work

Aww. That's sad! Had a lot of emotion in it. I liked it. 5/5
Good job.

Keep it up!

-Mallory

I rlly like this one... but i could cut em up in like 4 pieces... ;)
i think it would be better that way:) but this way it still is pretty good :)
keep on writing

GRTZ Spike

Awww how sweet but yet so sad well i liked it good job 5/5

I can feel your pain from this poem your a great poet!

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