Very very very powerful message!!
This poem was amazing, you showed the downfall and then showed how to rise from it!
Well done! Keep it up
5/5
*Gem*

GO YOU! YOU ROCK!

Very well written, keep up the good work!! Thanx for the comment on my poem!
Much Love,
~*Danielle*~

A gloomy poem, reaching down and ending uplifting, better to get it out than buried inside, good poem. You'll have lifetime to write lots of poems.

Very good poem,deep and powerful, and i agree
that is something to think about , been there done that, I really enjoyed your writing and hope to read more thanks , Tracy

I love ur poem i am stuck between 2 guys!!!!!! im me plz i need all the support i can get love_of_lies2006@yahoo.com or i_love_myself2000@yahoo.com

I love ur poem i am stuck between 2 guys!!!!!! im me plz i need all the support i can get love_of_lies2006@yahoo.com or i_love_myself2000@yahoo.com

I love ur poem i am stuck between 2 guys!!!!!! im me plz i need all the support i can get love_of_lies2006@yahoo.com or i_love_myself2000@yahoo.com

This piece is really nice and the underlying message is really good. Suicide is a serious sin. You must have awakened so many hearts with this very beautiful poem.

Great....

With love
Fsams

I agree with rohit~ keep up the that's a great advice to ppl who want to end their lives for no great reason~ love ur poem~! 5/5

Great poem....but very scary....i went thro a time in my life i did that but i finally told my parents cuz i got way too out of control!!!...so if ne one that reads this cutss plzzzz tell ur parents or at least sum 1 u kno can help u!