This is a really sad love poem. It shows that words that we say can hurt someone worse than anything else. Once we let them come out they can never be taken back. excellent expression in your poem. Great job!

Hey hun there was a l0t 0f emotion coming through in this poem. very touchig and sad.. grea structure and great choice of words. keep it up. xx

Awe. Now this one made me kinda sad. Very emotional write here. Even if it was kinda sad it was real good. I liked it!! 5/5

`Liz

A strong piece!
very powerful words.
I love the title SO much more than the poem itself, hehe!
doesn't mean that the poem wasnt gr8 thou ;)
I love your last stanza ALOT!!!!!

Keep writing
NemO xoxoxoxox

I love this poem ive red it more than 5 times

NOW THIS IS A POEM THAT I CAN RELATE 2. VERY GOOD.

Yes i can relate to that poem!! I love it!! Though it is so sad!! It must hurt!! I love this poem! I really really do!

It really captured my heart...keep it up! wow! You really are good!!!

I can feel your pain and my heart was just with so much compassion for you and this feelings you are going threw,,, beautiful poem...

Aww that is a really excellent poem you have there. I could feel what you were getting at and things. It made me think of some one I know. Keep up the great work.

This is a very powerful poem, i feel your emotions through your words! great job loved it 5/5

Very well written but very sad.. I hope itz not true but just ur imagination..

If this is truly something you went through, I understand but don't ever regret the things you do in life with anyone, they make you who you are, even if it hurts for that moment in time. Great poem. 5 points! =)

Ya it does.
it reminds that my new freind adam i hang out with him,he did sumthing and he told me if i told anyone he wuld go to jail cuz his freinds and him went to there teachers house and left him persents then he called and told me,then hes like if i go to jail will u write to me im like ya..
and ..idk i forget but ya i knew he liked me but hes going out with another girl which pisses me off

This is an amazing poem. I love it...good job 5/5

Nice work..keep writing..

Ur poem was very touchin and i thought it was very well written... i liked it alot

This is uber deep, i like it a lot.

Wow thats some poem
its ma deep well anywayz i love ur poem

Omg i loved this poem i cryed bcoz of how i oculd realte to it i reallllllly loved it