0oh that was sweet. beautifully written. short and sweet. 0oh ur gettin married h0w exciting =D anyway keep up the good work. xx

Fantastic as usual huni.your poems really inspire me .congratulations on the marriage!!i wish you every happiness

Aww! I can't believe you guys are getting married soo soon! omg! I'm soo happy for you! I can relate to it all except the last line obviously. lol Great poem!
xoxo

Awww....such a sweet poem, I really loved it Gem. It was so good! Very sweet ending too!
Charisma*

Awwwww! i REALLY liked this one. you made it work just so well! i loved the ending, thats way cute! amazing..yet again. 5/5

Absolutely amazing. Great job! *5/5

This is a very good poem can I show it tomy boyfriend? Well he'll like it if you say yes! Soo are you and your boyfriend or Fiancee still together me and my boyfriend have been together for a little more than a year which I know isn't long but yeah we want to get married but if we do we'll get married in like 2 years yeah it's because he is on his mission and I'm still in High school but by the time he gets back I'll be in College and he'll start college with me almost yeah I love him heis the most wonderful man I have ever met I can't wait for hi to return! Well now that I bored you with my story I'll let you get back to poem writing or whatever you're doing well good poem Bye
Love Katie
PS I'll be Mrs. Hallam in 2008 too lol

*sniff* that was so beautiful! i hope 2 spend tha rest of my life w/ sum1

Ya no I really like this its very good keep up the good work..... And I read some of your other poems they were WONDERFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Thats good nice poem

I really like this. The short lines, the simple words...and it's really touching.

5/5

I love this poem i hope u an ur man r 2gether 4ever

So that's what love is...
really sweet written
I love it..

Awwwwww this is so sweet!

Loving this poem...its nice

Awwww. That's such a cute and sweet poem! I loved this one so much!
Keep up the awesome work!
God Bless 5/5

~Tay~

I am in luv with dis poem. I just luv it.

I love this! Another excellent poem!
It is very sweet, and truely expresses your love!
5/5
xoxo-am

Aw....I really like this poem...I wish I could find my soul mate...I dink I did but he's not there yet...like this guy is that guy for me.he makes me feel like you know loved...the only thing I have to do is ask him..because all I'm hearing from him n other is he wants me to ask him out...but...good luck.....n come check out some of my poems..there not as good as your..but at least I tired..