"The stinging and pain of my sorrow in one drop,
But it becomes worse for thousands follow...
And for it to be cured my heart must cease to beat."

-A very powerful narrative. You have once again explored your sub-conscious and have become more familiar with repetition and wider vocabulary. Well done :]

-Elysium.

Rele well written ..

thankx for the comments .. do read other too ..

UsMaN.S

Deep feelings ... Too much sadness ...
just smile ! tomorrow will be better !
I wish u that ,

Best regards,
Mariana

Hey sandro its me again yes jennifer. i hope ur okay because if my passwords r not changed back to what they were i will do something we both will regret and its not a threat its a promise. p.s love the poem maybe u could become a poem reader in jail. i dont want to do it but plz just change them back. thank you. oh and traci seems nice

Hi, This poem teared me up a bit. I have nothing to say since it so sad, I would never think of a guy to write such a poem like this.
It really good- I can't figure out what the hell to say its just so good!!

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