I loved the way you used your words and made it into something that
had a deeper meaning to it. here are 5 points 4-@
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It's true somebody out there cares about you more then you know and taking your own life because you feel worthless is never the right thing to do. theres always somebody who will always be there for you. Great poem 5/5 never give up hope

That was really good ^^

Loved your message at the end of this poem. Excellent! 5/5 Take care Cindy

Wow i totally feel for you and understand thats how i feel all the timee..awesomee and thanks for the comments on mine..please if u wana tlk email me at summababii78@yahoo.com

The message was really good. the only problem I saw was know, should be no. Other than that it was wonderfully written, the flow was great, the word choice excellent. and the emtions deep and strong. 5/5

5/5 its an excellent poem. it has a different style then most i read but i loved the message in this. excellent job.

I love your work it has such great meaning...good job and its true there is always someone out there that cares even if we think we are alone