I LOVE THEM!
Keep writing dear.

Love, Grace.

Man dose r da best poems in da world!!!!!

That's really good i like the topics of the poems haha they were awesome

I loved it it was kind of like u thought about it and it showed like this cute before and after plot like scheme i just loved it u're really talented don't quite i love it

I really like these...you have a very wonderful talent!!! keep it up hun!

MickeysBabyGurl

These are very nice poems. I like how the words flow, unlike mine. I hope you write something new soon.

A most heartfelt poem...... expressing a lot of feelings that you have very well expressed... Well Done! :)

They are both super cute. I think the second poem flows better then the first one though. The first poem has a question we all want to ask the ones we love. Are we meant to be?. I loved that line because its a very real question. I love your endings as well because it makes the reader think again.. as in will the writer get together with their love. :) excellent first poem.

I believe the the second poem is the stronger of the two. I love the feeling you decribed in the first stanza. We never want it to end when we feel like this for anyone. I love the spark wording in the second stanza. All it takes is a spark in anything we do.. well done there. I love how you expressed your hurt in your room. We all go through that sometimes and your wording is perfect to mask that. The ending is good not great though. You should wrap it up by leaving the reader more to think about like there is hope that they will get together and maybe put them together as sort of a story.
Overall great though 5/5