I loved the way you used your words and made it into something that
had a deeper meaning to it. here are 5 points 4-@
P.S: Will you visit mine? and post,votes on all of them?......

Hey! i loved this poem! great job. i really feel like the girl in the first part.... anyways. great job. totally a 5!

Oh wow this is cute! it has a really good flow, really well written. good job!