Well.. that's the beauty of life. Learn to trust.. and get better friends. Though, no one can help who they like.. good work.

Whi is it
that him saying it affected
he greatly but her saying it
didnt affect him at all?

i would look at this bit again.
lol u have a typo but good work kep it up

This poems so different than some of your other ones, I love this style too! you're a great writer

This poem is obviously about you or someone you know and i can tell by all the detail.. however.. its very simple and is hard to understand in the beging because its all he and she and his and her.. and it just kind of jumps around..

Intresting prospective, This poem makes one think. The meassage was clear, the word choice was great, and the emtion strong. excellent job. 5/5

I love the way you use repetition in this poem to show the strngh your feelings well written hun

xxx alex xxx