I really liked the last line, because it said "what I thought". It tells all of us that nothing's ever completely real, true or perfect, no matter how we think. I really liked this.

5/5

This was one of the beautifulist poems i've ever read ..... there's so much feeling in every word, I honestly almost cried .... also i couldn't help but to deeply relate to this poem, thats a really tough place to be and an even tougher place to get out of! GOOD work, 5/5.