This is really good...keep up the good work.

Really good! Me and michelle apparently have the same taste! Keep writing; i'm definitely a fan. ur on my fav's list 4 sure!

By the way, thx for voting and commenting! Add me to ur favs, we should stay in touch. i hop i can be ur friend and be there for you always. u seem so alone and I would hate for something to happen and i souldn't help you out! I'll keep an eye out 4 u so i can read every1 of your poems ;)

Daviddddddd.... why haven't u written anymore poems????? keep writing, i'm looking forward to more poems!!!! Keep it up!

Sometimes people make mistakes all u have to do is keep going on even when u cant.Having mistakes doesnt mean u cant write just shows u write with ur heart.

Great work david!..kp it up!!.....i can soo relate to your poems maybe we sail on the same boat..lol.......hp u r ok.....U wrote this 1 well........
xxPoojaxx

I like how you made the picture form into my mind. I really enjoyed reading it.

Another great poem!

I love this!