Wow.. this is soo cute.. i love "love poems" hehe =) anyway.. a couple suggestions "As you can see my baby,
I miss you greatly,
And want you by my side." that stanza does not need the last line.. it doesnt fit .. also i think you have a type-o here "I miss you beautiful smile" i think it should be " i miss YOUR beautiful smile"

It's funny how we miss the little things about the one's we love when they are way, such as a laugh or a smile, great work 5/5

Aawww..that was sweet! i'm going through that stage right now..haha! this was a real sweet poem! 5/5

Hey great poem... no thanx for the corrections... im glad you liked it though...

5/5. I feel this way about my ex bf. I loved it. It almost mad me cry!

Awww another sweet poem..love it =]

It made me cry!! I miss him :(
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