Aawwww..that was soo cute! i love that poem. i hope to relate to it in the future, since i'm still single =(. haha! cute poem!

Its soo touching, well if its based on your life i hope it will go as great as ur poem

Great job!!!!

I get lost in his eyes
As he stares back in mine.
And as he's holding me tightly
I'm glad that he's mine.

^^^^How cute!!!!!I give ur poem in all a 5/5((I wish I could give it higher!!))

Wow this is really long! but it is really good! keep it up and thank you for the comment. i'm glad ur so happy! ur very blessed!

Wow, very long poem.
Very cute and sweet though.
More of a innocence love.
Very well done. Loved it!
God Bless 5/5

~tay~

I like this poem! you wright such long poems, but still they make sense! good job!