All this is so true... truely from the heart

Hey very good and true.. =)

Very well done. You make a ;ot of excellent points in your write. I have ran into many of theses in my lifetime. GladI read this. Very eye opening.

Wow. To be so young you sure seem to have a good head on your shoulders. I love all the truths you bring to light in this free verse. Excellent job!

I like this alot.. very inspirtional.. however.. it doesnt really sound like a poem.. it seems more like a speech.. but thats just my opinion

Wow..very good...all so true...it doesnt really seem like a poem though...but its still great..good job!

I like this a lot. It is good advice on life and its little quirks.

~amanda~

Wow this made me think about my life and stuff i do everyday. i dont have the best life i cut my self and yea. BUT KEEP IT UP!