5/5. good poem!

This poem is really good. it's so sad, i guess that's why i like it b/c i can relate to it. anyways thanx alot for the comment it really means alot to me when people read and comment on my poems, and it's cool if you send it to your friend. let me know when you write some new poems, b/c i would love to read them. shanik

Well done this is a really good wright keep up the good work :-]

Great job...i give it a 5/5

This poem literally made me cry.
The last stanza is really deep it adds more poem to the poem!!
Keep it up huni!!
xx Rox

This poem literally made me cry.
The last stanza is really deep it adds more poem to the poem!!
Keep it up huni!!
xx Rox