Very sweet love poem.

Very sweet. I loved it. :) *5/5

I really like your poem it's very much like what I feel about my love I guess us girls can relate a lot! lol well continue writing I'll enjoy reading the poems lol!
Katie

Ah this is so sweet.
thank you for the comment

This was beautiful uve explained urself really good. great use of words. keep up the great work. hope u had a merry christmas! xx

Beautiful 5/5

This is such a sweet poem! very well written!

Its a good poem, but why dont you try to give it a steady rhyme? it would really compliment the poem

Narc xxx

This was so beautiful...
Wonderfully written, as always.
I loved it.

I especially love the way you made the poem about finding and being with the "one" person.
I guess we all wish to be in a happy place like this with the person we love
how you made it sounds perfect in the poem

Awww lovely poem Cindy xxx