Comments : An Ode to Our Nothingness

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    "Someday love will pound at my door.
    But, I will only laugh in its face,
    Love will then cry itself to sleep,
    Love only needs to be brave.
    So brave, that it knocks the huge, thick, wall around my heart down."

    I love those lines, it almost made the emotion seem like a real person.
    It's an amazing poem
    Well done!
    5/5
    *Gem*