Wow...i really liked that poem! it seems you've felt a lot of pain and anger with some kind of break up, and i feel for ya! i could see how you were hurting even just in the first few stanzas nice work, keep writing!
kayla

Nice Poem// I Like How You Used A Half Rhyme At One Point. It Was Full Of Emotion,Which Indeed,Is What Makes A Poem.
Very Powerful
Try Using Some Alliteration? I Think It Would Really Finish Of Your Work Well.
Keep Up The Good Work
-dawn- x