Good poem. So much emotions. Very heartfelt. The flow was off a bit but the rhyming was great.
Keep it up && thanks for the comment.

Very very good but the flow was off a tiny bit but that's okk. It was a great poem anyway!
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Very good poem, so sweet and so tragic, I loved it and the flow was simply marvelous. Beautiful.

Hey a very heartfelt poem. very well written. good job keep it up xx