Wow this is really good. it was deep and full with emotion i liked it a lot. although some of the stantza's are really long, and it kind of throws the flow off a little, maybe try shorting them or spliting them if half. i think it would flow better. 5/5

~Kristina

Greatly written, very nice job...
it was really emotional.5/5

Hey, like i said before, i like you poems =)