Comments : THE WAY

  • 17 years ago

    by Liz

    This, honestly, started off quite good. But the end stanza confused me a bit. Or maybe it's just me. I dunno. Anyways, it was an enjoyable read. Can't wait to read more!! Take care.

    -` Poetess // Liz

  • 17 years ago

    by mommyof2

    I agree with your first comment but it is a great start keep writting!

  • 17 years ago

    by Mel

    The beginning was awesome, but then end seemed kind of out of place...good work though, i liked it!

  • 17 years ago

    by natalie

    Hey remember me.. you commented on my song that i wrote.. well thankz for that and your poem was pretty good its just try and add more detail into it =] mwah good stuff

  • 17 years ago

    by keep breathing

    Hey i think it was really good and i loved the begining 2

  • 17 years ago

    by Liz

    Mira quien resucito.

    Hows everything?
    mandame un mensaje cuando leas esto. oki adios. =]

  • 17 years ago

    by Joel

    Hahahha mai para q tu veas ------el no esta muerto el esta vivo joel no esta murto el esta vivo----jajajajajjaja bien y tu bella estra~a......ase dies decadas q ni me mandas un mensaje!!!!!!! mira q paso con el chat room!

    how is everything nena all is good or all is bad (how is life treating u)

    _joe_