OMG!!!!! how awesome id this poem?? i'll tell yu, it's sooooo totaly awesome, i luv the flow to it it really is deep keep up the good work, and feel free to comment on sum of mine

Amazing.
The structure of the poem of the poem is so very different and unique, it makes the poem worth reading. =]
The flow was very good and your choice of wording was perfect.

And you're right it is a never ending cycle and very hard to quit. I still find it hard to quit after three years. =[

Anyway, wonderful job, keep it up! 5/5

Stephanie

Wow, you know, i like this because its so deep and so true and meaningful.
You have so much talent, i feel for your pain, that i can see through every line.
keep writing
much love, Tara-Kay

Ohmy! I loved this one. The depth got to me the most. The flow in this one was amazing. Great work. You have talent, my friend. =) 4.6/5