Comments : Holding Memories

  • 17 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Cindy, I feel what you mean in this one....as only a sister could! Good poem. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by john graver

    Very nice write. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Stephanie

    *Tears*
    That was amazing. Terribly sad but amazing none the less. I know what if feels like to miss someone in your life and I feel that pain in my heart every day. Wonderful job writing this one hun! Keep it up. 5/5

    Stephanie

  • 17 years ago

    by Michelle18

    "Pain grips me with such force
    Ripping at my fragile heart
    I need to be resting in your arms
    The pain to great when we're apart"

    this is my favorite part! keep up the good work!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Landi Cordier

    So I sit here crying, alone

    While you're in a place far away

    its an excellent poem with a wonderfull flow and rhym, all i would change if i were is the comma in the first verse of the last stanza, its puts the emphasis on alone. job well done!

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Wow...so very sad and heartbreaking...such a pleasure to read.
    You have so much talent, you really know how to hit a nerve with the reader.
    Stay strong.

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    *also, please read my comment on the message board for you.

  • 17 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Wow wonderful write. I loved it. I could relate to this poem and I am sure a lot of others can as well. Great Job. The flow was good. Keep up the outstanding work.

    Peace, Joe

  • 17 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    Everybody longs for the day they finally find true love, sometimes it just takes a while, but the reward is always worth it, excellent write 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Audrie

    This was a beautifully written poem, as are all your others. I know exactly how this feels, and it's nice to know that I'm not the only one. I hope to enjoy more of your work.

  • 17 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    This is another great poem by you, you are really so talented

  • 17 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Wow.. lol finally one i havent comemtned.. and lucky me .. its a really great poem!!! like wow..! its soo sad.. but still just really great.. i cant even tell you why.. i just love it.. amazing job.. sorry i have to constructive tips its just perfect the way it is

  • 17 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Heartwrenching. Sadness put to rhyme.

  • 14 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Awww, this one is a tearful one. its good though, your writing is just amazing. xx