Comments : Star Dust and Love

  • 17 years ago

    by Princess of snow

    WOW...I think your poem is very sweet and cute... : )

  • 17 years ago

    by Kenneth

    Very pretty poem i like it alot

  • 17 years ago

    by Liz

    Goodness. I don't know who would vote this so low?!?!?! This was such a lovely write. Beautifully written!
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    "Flowers will bloom and seasons pass
    But you and I will forever last
    Withering petals and fallen leaves
    Can witness our love eternally."
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    ^^ I absolutely love that stanza!! This is a TRUE love poem. I'm glad I read this! Never stop writing!! Take care and God bless.

    -`Poetess

  • 17 years ago

    by debbylyn

    I agree with Glen-Duh...who is voting here? This is a very sweet love poem, good flow and rhyme. perfect! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    "Love is simple and easy to do
    When it comes to me loving you
    Days can go by, and tears can fall
    But I'll still love you through it all"

    I love those lines the most, at this moment in time i can really relate to them.
    I haven't been on for ages either =)
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by emmerz

    Ok, HOW is this getting a 4.1??? lol well anyways, i absolutely LOVED the imagery to this, especially

    Flowers will bloom and seasons pass
    But you and I will forever last
    Withering petals and fallen leaves
    Can witness our love eternally
    Like the white glitter dust on the stars
    I'll be your light no matter how far

    astonishing =) i always love reading your poems, as i can see what a true poet is able to write !
    5/5

    Emilyy-

  • 17 years ago

    by TRAGiC BEAUTY

    "Love is simple and easy to do
    When it comes to me loving you
    Days can go by, and tears can fall
    But I'll still love you through it all"

    I loved these lines. I can totally relate to them right now! Perfect rhyming and flow!
    xoxo

  • 17 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Aww... so cute... the rhyme was great and the flow was good.. strong emotions .. beautiflly written..i really really realy really really really really reeally.. like this poem .. lol =]P