Great work, I loved the was it was written.
Thanks for your comment and I apologise for being a bit harsh in my comment on your contest. I know you meant well.

Cheers,
GA

Wow, i can't pick a fave of yours anymore! lol. This one is a tough contender, there seemed to be a few shaky area's but sheer talent pulled the words through.
A lot of people would be able to relate to this one i think, i know i can.
Excellent rhyming!
5/5
*Gem*

I can so relate to this poem. Loved these lines:

Fear was hidden in good dreams
Love was never what it seemed
I thought pretend was real and true
My mind blinded lies you threw

Great flow and rhyme throughout. Great job as always! 5/5

"The smiles and times we shared
Were never real, you never cared"

Lovely wording in this couplet! I loved the poem. I like the way it is all crammed into one stanza....it's a change of pace for me to read. Lovely job!
xoxo

This was a well written poem. almost made me cry a bit... The rythem was well put. there was such a deep feeling behind the poem.. great work :)

Awe; That was really good. normally i dont really like poems that are written in one paragraph. But i really liked this one. Great job 5/5

Nice flow and good rhyme.. your emotions come out nicely in this poem... im sure a lot of people can relate to it