Great poem 5/5 :]

Okay poem, not the best, but well written.
5.5
~Stevie

Good poem agn....5/5

God bless u

That is lovely hunni u hav real potentual keep it up
xxtake carexx

A beautiful poem with perfect flow. nice job,
you are so talented,
"weshakant zor jwan u nasekn"
keep it up

Great job Hazha. The opposites you used worked well in this and by that I mean moon & sun, spring & autumn and yeah. Anyway well done
cheers, josh

I'm guessing that the As.. model to the poem is your basis. You free your self from Rhyme scheme. Not easy to do. How ever the flow was mildly choppy but I will tell you that I couldn't write a poem like that. That style of poetry is beyond me. Well written.