Comments : Final sentence

  • 17 years ago

    by ...Jasmine...

    So much passion and honesty. Showing the depth of your soul.
    Dont ever let someone try to make it better.
    Cause they only make it worse.
    You have to find and accept your own feelings.
    I know what they say "it will be better, just talk about it, we can get through it"
    Those words wont help. But only you can help yourself.
    I believe you'll find the beauty and positive outlook on life.
    Dont stop writing poetry, absolutely beautiful. 5/5 xox
    Jasmine

  • 17 years ago

    by MiaFairy

    Wow. this is sooo good. its so true. i went through something similar....i wasnt used but the guy went out with me and told me he loved me so i wouldnt kill myself. he thinks im crazy and should go to a hospital. great poem.

  • 17 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Hunni, this poem is really powerful and strong emotions in it. its very good and it stands out. im sorry you have had to feel like this, its good you can express yourself this way. dont hesitate to email for a chat ok x x x x