Lovely lovely. Put me in mind of the movie "What Dreams May Come"

Ah yes sweet young love !!! Wow nice poem and nice write. I really enjoyed this work of yours. I look forward to reading and enjoying more of your thoughts put to paper.

You've done love poems!!!
Oh, i've been waiting to read a love poem from you and didn't disappoint!!
I love love love it!!!
Thankyou for writing this =)
5/5!!!
*Gem*

This sounds like a vision of Heaven where John is waiting! Beautiful the way you painted the images with your words! 5/5

Your support has honestly inspired me in ways I can't explain. Another brillant work by the way. 5/5

Omg!!
This was so beautiful!!! It's got to be one of my favorite love poems that I have ever read on here!! So beautifully written. =] Wonderful job, it couldn't get any better. Perfection. =] Keep it up! 5/5

Stephanie

Wow great job! i would love to go 2 this place.lol...very imaginative! i can see it clearly..ur a very talented writer. 5/5

Wow... i feel this too.. when my boyfriend is not around, i go to my place i have for me and him... once again it flows smoothly and it rhymes perfectly... great job and thank you for the comments

I love the ending you used, made me read it twice, i give it a 5/5!!!! great poem cindy, lots of emotions!!

We'll see our love ones again in a place that i believe is just how you described. 5/5 nice write

I have to say WOOOW! very vivid picture that you wrote, def. a 5/5, excellent job!

Where you are waiting, your love to share.

that comma there is all about the whole poem that i would change!

good work!

(this is my "utopia")

Another great poem! This was beautiful! I loved the verbal imagery in this poem. I could feel strong emotions and I could sense every line was written with such deep passion. A very good read!
Thank you for sharing "Your World" with us! =)
5/5

Wonderful write. I loved it. The flow was a little rocky here and there, but the structure was good. Overall a great poem. Keep up the great work.

Peace, Joe

Another great and wonderful peom!
You have very heartfelt poems.
I absolutly love them!
Keep it up! God Bless 5/5

~Tay~

What a gorgeous poem. I absolutely adore it.

In the first stanza, the sentence - "I go there when the pain is TOO much." - You used the wrong kind of 'to, too' then. It should be 'too'.

Overall, good job.

This was beautiful...my favourite part was the last stanza, I really liked that.
I thought this was well written.

Oh my goodness.. i lovelovelove this poem.. the idea of it is soo great.. and its paints a great picture.. i love descriptiveness (idk if thats a word but w/e lol) and all the poems ive read you have it.. its so great.. the only thing in this poem i would change which isnt really a change just a misunderstanding probably is the line

"Where you are waiting your love to share."

idk if its supposed to be like that or its supposed to be

"where you are waiting [with] love to share" or something like that

I thought this was a good piece of writing. It was a wonderful picture you created. I think many a person would like and probably dose frequently visit your wonderland.

Brad

P.S. Thanks for commenting on my poems. It's always nice to get comments.

Wow, Cindy. I think this is my favorite so far from you. It was so beautiful. And I can totally relate.. Lol. I have my own world too. I usually only go there when I'm sad, or angry. Or when I can't sleep. :]] Lol. But, I loved this. Very much. It had tons of emotions in it. And it flowed so well. & The images - AMAZING! Keep it up, Hunny.

Bri.x