Great work Em, It gives me so much hope for the future. I can't seem to think of anything else to say...
Perfect.

Matt

Great poem. I love this piece, *5/5.

I enjoy the repitition that is held throughout the poem that inquires the reader to continue reading and also the positive ending to the poem. Very uplifting and nicely written. 5/5.

If only life were as pretty as what it's described like in this poem.
5/5
♥
~Stephen White

This was beautiful.
Such an inspiring write..
The imagery was fantastic, as always, and the flow was perfect.

You are a splendid writer! yes, i said splendid ;]

What an inspiring message. Good flow and the rhyming doesn't seem forced. Great job on this!

I reallyl ike this because personally i feel it sounds like a prayer, it seems really well though of and well expressed :D

xxx alex xxx

Usually if a poem starts with the same word every line, it's ennoying, but this was such a good poem! =] I enjoyed it =) And made me think about the things.. what if everything was like that.. What is every tear would become a smile =)? hehe keep it up.
xxx