This is soo much better than mine version of it. It isn't even too simalar. It's great, keep up the awesome work, and maybe you can help me fix mine if I need it.

Very sweet, it leaves a soft sigh in its readers. Beautiful ending. My favorite was the second stanza.

Really sweet!!! your an excellent writer. keep up the good work!

Fantastic.
You did wonderful writing this one, it's so beautiful. Great way to end this one too. =] Overall, amazing job. Keep it up! 5/5

Stephanie

Nicely done!
Keep up the great work.
I loook foward to read of your poems.
God Bless 5/5

~Tay~

This is a really sweet poem! nice

Narc xxx

Awww this is such a sweet and cute little poem! Wonderful way to write.
Once again great job!
God Bless 5/5

Aww that was simply beautiful!!!
much love and many kisses,
bex